Maria GABRIELLE

Great imagery. I can really relate to what your trying to show. This is so true in many cases. The poem has a great layout and good rhythm, but you ...

Good job. your poem has a nice rhyme scheme which is hard to come across. The rhythm could use a little work, but it's good.I suggested some changes and I ...

Hey your poem was really good. I loved it. I will like to read more of your poems or even stories if you write stories. It was unique the way ...

Hey I'm not a great poet and don't know much about poetry, but your poem was really good. It had a great rhyme (it was different,but good). Every stanza was ...

This was a good attempt and it was open and honest. I could see what you were trying to say, but I’ve never felt this way and was a little ...

This poem had some beautiful imagery (personification). It really brought the poem to life. Your poem had a good rhyme scheme and nice rhythm. The lines were laid out smoothly ...

Hi i'm no poet but that was AMAZING. i wish i could write like u. i always wanted to be a poet but i'm no good. Your poem is has ...